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[Dead Detention #3.5]

oh crap chaos girl! ;)

these are SO much fun! thank you so much. I had a weird psychic sadness 30 minute attack hut me a couple minutes ago, it's completely gone now though, thanks to this awesome flash.

;) I had to email my three friends and make sure they were all good! O.o those are not fun.

[Mysterious Fort Escape 3]

aw this is nice! Fun Farcical Escapism at its finest! But the background sound (waves crashing) was too loud for me. When you make these, can you make it so we can turn off the bgm and sound effects separately? I need to turn off the bgm after a while because I have random? sound sensitivity/overstimulation but the sound effects themselves can stay on a bit longer, I find. ;) Depends on the sounds themselves. ;) I like the setting! nice nad seaside and open!

ainarsa responds:

Hi Radeshtka, thank you, I will separate effects from bgm.

[Maryse]

great, the LOOK is a lot like Deep Sleep series. Which is a GREAT series. yu could learn from Scriptwelder, on that front. on the other hand, movement is clunky. Getting rid of the first person actor could make it scarier, so the player feels more immersed in the world.

movement must be smoother. action sequences are really stick-y too. make sure it is smooth next time. ;) LOVe the backgrounds! as for the monsters, without changing your style, maybe do it this way instead?

- more War of the Worlds (original), less jump scare. (infer the horror, rather than show it right away. build Up to it, allude to it, let it caress your psyche slowly, painfully, like Samarra or Kayako or Tomoe is about to rip your fingernails off one by one, but you don't know when.

;) nice attempt!

[Doris and the Dragon: Ep1]

hhaha, snarky power grannies with carts. after death. always SWEET. but on my computer, the play screen doesn't stay in the window- it grows past the bounds. And it's hard to select objects when the inventory is at the top... and vice-versa- one just sticks on the other instead of the one you want. consider altering the way the inventory is accessed. ;)

[Tainted Olive - Chapter 2]

this series is loveness. everything EVERYTHING is perfect. don't listen to those idiots who can't tell a good game from a handholding horror. ;)

BlackOlive responds:

Again, thanks. From the start, we knew this was not going to be a widespread phenomenon, but those who enjoy this specific type of game really like it. And hopefully there are some converts along the way :)

[Tainted Olive - Chapter 1]

oh. my. god.

this is like, Scriptwelder, Michael Hibbert and Skutnik married Erril of Sherril and had a holy golden glowing lovechild.

I love you. This is... this is crosshatched hand-drawn heaven. there. aren't. enough. stars. for. this.

when I reach for the spot where my lovely half-baked writing talent used to be, all I find is an empty burn mark. I worked it too hard, and it went to sleep. But you inspire me, nonetheless, to just live in your world. So wonderful, this.

BlackOlive responds:

Thank you. Means a lot to us, it really does.

[Lol Temple Escape 2]

fun! I love the variations of sound and the image elements, the pizza, the jewels, the interesting spheres, etc. ;) and the puzzles aren't hard, they are relaxing! very nice.

[LoL Temple Escape]

pizza temple.

[Behind The Grey Door]

nice golden shadow game. ;) love these.