Vagenturecbos's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Silent Hill: Room 304]

you tell too much, and show too little! instead of SAYING there was something bad that happened here, SHOw it! Like, add in a background item or two... muzzy it into the scenery a tad... a trail of blood, a tear stained napkin...a missing shoe... that kind of thing. ;) too many words take away from the atmosphere of a thing like this, and the music is too overwhelming. it distracts rather than adds. sometimes silence is everything. not saying you shouldn't have music, but mute it so it is JUUUUUST UNDERRRR the player's median hearing level. you talk about scary? woo!

[Secret of Mystery House 3]

this... is a house... of many grammar composition errors... ;( work on your diction, projection, sentence structure and word tenses, please! ;)

[Dark Horror Escape]

easy and fun- BUT TOO DARK! work up the lighting a bit, yeah?

[Tipping Point]

gaah! I love this game, played through it before, but it won't play for me here. SADNESS.

[Alone in the Cosmos]

Damn. imagine the awesome if you, the Antumbra Guy, and Scriptwelder would team up. the multiverse would have a nosebleed, and the TARDIS would explode.

[Silent Asylum]

Oh now that is more my kind of puzzle (456 etc...) I liked the visual solve, as I am a visual thinker. ;)

[Highwayman]

Damn, Iriy. Why you no stop making theez good gamez? I need a carpal tunnel button so I can auto-attack, BRO! MAKE IT HAPPEN?

[Joeyquest]

oh god damn those r*ses..... those fucking r*ses. man this was AWESOME. the art was BEAUTIFUL, the humor, while crude, was spot on and straight, and I laughed my ass off. It was really relaxing.

I don't like Homestuck or 4Chan, and I don't know about the Steven thing. But this was fab. Is your stuff always this abrasively crude?

[Cursed Islands]

I think the minimalist style really works, and I LOVe that it's monochrome black and white! ;) please make more like this!

[The Irritatis: the road]

And in some Magritte and work on your vocal tone (I know you're trying, but get some coaching or something, QUICKLY SO WE CAN HAVE MORE GAMES FROM YOU) and I will be convinced you're a god.