Very nice start.
Sweet game... like the others said, itcould be better in so many ways, but the bones are great... I don't know ANY scripting, so... you are great, compared to me! I want to make games, but it's probably going to be impossible for me... I am a perfectionist, and i have ADHD and other things that get in my way because it makes me physically ill in a way to concentrate on something when the thrill of doing so is no longer there, if outside forces prevent me from accomplishing my goals for the project. Please keep this style! the storytelling aspect of course needs work, but hey; i didn't used to be so good at all the fanfiction I write. Please keep making this style of flash movie! I love the way oyu used the music and the dying. you rock.