Vagenturecbos's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Myosotis Chapter 2]

..my god. you and Mateusz Skutnik should marry each other and have little epic escape babies. who cares if you're both guys.

the everything, music, game, ideas, everything... par excellence, as always. WOOT.

As for me, well...

You sure know how to whistle.

[Myosotis Chapter 1]

ZOZ. omg I love oyu man.

Excellent use of noir and visual minimalism. MY GOD MAN.

I pray you post 3 soon, as I just found it on other sites but stopped to play here instead.

excellent. M YGOD MAN.

[Josh Tam Mysteries G2 : E]

Okay. I will give you all the stars, because in terms of object of play you totally hit it.

HOWEVER... as an aspiring writer, I will tell you two things that will prevent all but the most enterprisng and inconsequential of trolls from trolling you for no good and substantially helpful reason.

1. Show don't say. In the case of this kind of game, it is imperative that you communicate effectively with your visuals. In my opinion, there is too much text, not enough gameplay proper.

2. Improve your english mechanics. Some of the mother's responses were too youthful and howed improper entence structure. Read like a writer. Practice writing a bit; it will help you eventually see whee you are off.

3. Practice in you head. Visualize the goal you wish to achieve in as many imagery-utile ways as possible within that noggin of yours. not only will it gve you perspective on THIS work but on EVERYTHING ELSE IN YOUR LIFE as well. ;)

good luck.

In essence, nice work, but lacking in sentence structure and gameplay elements that are expected for this type of game. (Not enough adventure, too much contributive text- this does not appear to be a text adventure.) the buttons are nice and smooth, though! ;)

josh-tamugaia responds:

Thanks for your helpful comments and suggestions. I really appreciate them and will note them down. I'm not a writer, at least not a professional or an aspiring one, but I like to try my hand on many stuff such as programming, art, music and yes, also writing and story-telling. So giving me feedback like this means a lot to me since it is good guidance. I'm not sure if I will be able to improve, but I will definitely try my best in later projects.

Again, thank you for your insights.

[Wilt: Last Blossom]

WHY NO MEDALS? THIS GAME IS AWESOME!!! I am loving it so far. and the controls are nice for my autistic dyspraxia and cogdef/execfunct problems. ;)

[Elf Story]

dude, this was fun! But, I am autistic and have a dyspraxia, so it was a devil of a time tryign to get some of those arrows.... you might consider an overhaul of he clicketyness... or not... jst saying, it was hard with my motor skill problem issue and cognitive deficiency/executive function problems to find those arrows... those make it so I can't always understand what I am seeing or react in the right way because my brain stem is affected, ie my left-right andcoordination suffers. ;( being a gamer, this is a pain for me.

maybe oy ucould put circular bursts instead of pointing arrows? you wouldn't really HAVe to change anythingelse, really enjoyed the rest. PLease make sequels? ;) awesome game bro, just that one little issue, but hey. :)

[Pyroscape 3]

dood! 39!C AW3$0M3!

[RoboJesus: Kill Tests]

muhahahahaha. but what about hte RAPTOR JESUS death?

[Robot Weapon]

...lovethe game, but we can't get the lever and screwdriver becaues of the link. !!!!!

fixies!!!!

[K.O.L.M. 2]

this... this is better than K.O.L.M. 1 my friend. So much so... my god man! MY GOD. And Father looks lke Robert Jordan. Just sayin. woot.

oh my god, i would pay for this game. it's just sooo:
atmospheric
thought-provoking
suspenseful
AWESOME and
MADE OF WINSAUCE
I have a dyspraxia (autism-induced random motor skill issue), and I have to say that the tiny improvements in the controls you must have made from number one's controls setup were an excellent decision; i was able to get everywhere and do everything, unlike before, so thank you so much for that. I realllly loved this, and I hope that KOLM 3 goes just as well. Oh, and please do NOt change the controls anymore; they are perfect, and so smooth, like buttah.

[Mutant Uprising]

ooooooooo zombie game!!! This game requires medals, my good sir. PLEAAAAAASE?