Vagenturecbos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lychgate]

sweet!

Let's see if I follow you, conceptually...

Entrance to death = Alice in Wonderland
The characters = The Wizard of Oz

yes?

MarcK responds:

what?

[Chrono Trigger Unglued 11]

dude.

but... Chrono didn't get to use the GOlden Bat and go all Little Slugger on the cat.

That little prig, he's where it's at; his fleas kick ass... and make 15-year simmer donkey soup.

sweet shit man.

Clovis15 responds:

I'm glad you liked it.

[Naudhiz]

Great stuff! BUT...

Your usage needs tweaking... there are certain parts that will horrify the grammar nazis.

The Path of his Father...

It would have been better had you had the man commissioning Collin say,

... if he follows the same path AS his father, or if he continues down the same path as his father, or if he takes the same path as his father... do you understand?

Do This Mission... in that particular conversation, an operative in control of another operative might be far more likely to use better English and say this:

Connor will carry out this mission, Collin is to carry out this mission... etc.
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I would be happy to um, what is the word? -Beta- your next script, if you like...

Never done a script before! Might be fun! I write too much Doctor Who fanfiction anyway... WELL there can never be too much of THAT, but still...

Other than those types of things, this was great! Nothing else wrong with it that I could see. I don't do Flash, yet, but hey. This was great.

Marsume responds:

Yeah, I never really noticed that before, but the script/story wasn't written by me. I was just given some voices and the outline of what the storywriter wanted the scene to look/feel like.

Thanks though :)

[Doctor EH?!?!]

ca was here

... sweet. Practice on drawing the people, and this will be even better! LOVE THE DALEKS!

btw... is that YOu James?

Chitch responds:

Thanks for the review! I have improved a lot over the years. This was a very early project

[ANDTD Tribute]

wow

I love a well executed stick man.

damn fine job, as far as I'm concerned.

The middle battle scene, the one withe the swords and the outside of the building, it sort resembled the scene from Advent: Children... it was righteous, man.

Scythe-NX responds:

Thanks alot!

[Xmas Day at Doctor Who's]

HOLY SHIST neheh

OMFG

AS a DIE HARD fangirl, I HAVE to weigh in on this. It's my -DUTY-.. plus i write fanfiction for the genre, so... As soon as I can figure out how to do the -#$%Q#E$%- you guys are doin, I -WILL- be here, NYERTARDIS, StealinyerTIMELORD. wooot

Nice job! But the humour isn't tight enough for me.. i like a nice tight script. Not to mention OTHER things that are tight... like Matt and Davids' bums..

Hot damn it's good to be American.

Moon-manUnit-42 responds:

I didn't write the script, I had nothing to do with this sketch...it was originally a filmed live action sketch for a show called Dead Ringers and I just recorded the diologue and animated it. If you want to see the real sketch, search it on youtube and you'll find it. As for the Humour, it is too British...but then again, it was a sketch for a BRITISH Comdey Show. I guess Newgrounds is too American for British humour.

[Paging Dr. Seuss]

Cat in the Hatter- really great satire

oh goodness oh gracious
what shall we all do
The Cat has gone Crazy
The patients will sue!

Very concise diction and superb flow.
The voice talent must have had a time of it.

ha ha! this was great fun!

CatFat responds:

Haha, thanks a lot! I think we had a great cast, and I think everyone had a good time. It was a fun project, and we're glad you enjoyed the end result!
-DarkLink777