Vagenturecbos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pop]

heh. I have Perleche. this is hilarious.

[PokeNormal Activity]

heheheh.

[No Another Pokemon Parody]

I could have done without Ash's Ass.... nobody likes it, really... those jeans... just make him look fat.

Anyway, FUCK THIS WAS AWESOME!

I wish they'd make this in real life. sigh. I mean, I love little animals nad shit, but DAMN.

[Pokemon Gods]

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSs.

FINALLLLYYYYY.

my GOD man! the WIN!

Pokedex: Pidgyoto got Ko'd, turned into a zombie, and ate your face. then burped and threw up a magikarp. Which ate your SOUL.

bada TSSSS.

[Passion of the Manwhore]

DOOOOD what do you smoke when you do these? this is hilariouser than the last one.

[The Crystal of Zanthar]

hrm. not bad! I like the backgrounds. HOWEVER, thinking as a writer, i find that the music is too busy and inappropriate to the mood, and the guy should not be smiling in that situation; it's grave determination he should be comveying, with a bit of snark, unless I'm missing something. Also, the animation does not match the lovely background enough for them to work well together. change one or the other to better match. i would suggest changing the animation style to match the backgrounds a tad. ;)

CroMagg responds:

Thanks for taking the time for the review!

Yeah, looking back after the rush of making something complete in a short-ish amount of time the music is very cluttered to me as well so that is something I'm looking to change up if I make it into the next round. And if I have enough time this round I'd love to smooth out the animation more. I was working in anywhere from 12-6 FPS where i usually work in 24 so it's a bit choppier than usual.

You actually nailed a huge misstep in my plot as well. Looking back I didn't want the prince (blonde main character) to be happy at the end there. I put that expression kind of as a place holder and wanted to go back and make him look concerned, confused, and angry. Regardless of me getting into farther NATA rounds I'm going to continue the story line and re-polish this animation with a lot of the critiques everyone has been saying and that's very high on the list. Hopefully it won't confuse viewers in my future animations for this story.

Sorry for the novel, thanks again.
Cheers!

-J

[-apex-]

nice sketchy feel!

WEB OF FEAR.

[Dinosaurs: The Last Day]

ah, the sad, mad fate of Sue Tiny.

Harry Dresden Approves.

RetroSleep responds:

Thanks! I had to google every name you just referenced haha.

[The Willow Tree]

circle gameeeee!

[Dreamer]

nice. bit stiff, but that will go away with practice before you know it.
and I don't yet have the facility to make things that are in my head into lovely flash, so... you go, dude.

the bunny looked evil slightly though, like he just fell asleep after drinking Arthur's blood at the cave near Antioch. but it still works! you realize later it's just surprised.