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[Across the Universe Ep.2]

sweet.

OHhhh! This was the Awesome! Good Job Pencil!

[NiN10Doh: ToThe64thPower]

oh wow

shit that was awesome crack, man.

[The Last Man on Earth]

xmas

short and sweet, and gets the point across! And not so sad it kills you at the end.

Thanks for makin this. I needed that.

[Drunk Ass Elf]

heheheheh

sweet.

[Naudhiz]

Great stuff! BUT...

Your usage needs tweaking... there are certain parts that will horrify the grammar nazis.

The Path of his Father...

It would have been better had you had the man commissioning Collin say,

... if he follows the same path AS his father, or if he continues down the same path as his father, or if he takes the same path as his father... do you understand?

Do This Mission... in that particular conversation, an operative in control of another operative might be far more likely to use better English and say this:

Connor will carry out this mission, Collin is to carry out this mission... etc.
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I would be happy to um, what is the word? -Beta- your next script, if you like...

Never done a script before! Might be fun! I write too much Doctor Who fanfiction anyway... WELL there can never be too much of THAT, but still...

Other than those types of things, this was great! Nothing else wrong with it that I could see. I don't do Flash, yet, but hey. This was great.

Marsume responds:

Yeah, I never really noticed that before, but the script/story wasn't written by me. I was just given some voices and the outline of what the storywriter wanted the scene to look/feel like.

Thanks though :)

[Asaroki 11- Departure]

sweet.

Maaaaan, I redrew one of the characters for my original fiction/game idea a couple weeks ago... I've been asking what different people think so I can get a well-rounded idea of what I want to do... You rock.

This was a great little story... I want to see more, really soon, if you please!

Yes, the story was generic, but sometimes simplicity works. With a bit of a tune-up as your skills progress, this will REALLY be something. Not that it isn't now, of course; it's great as is!

[Turd Eating Cat]

...ewww

Dude.. I have Asperger's... this has given me far too many disgusting visual images...

rather inventive though, I must say.

Good job!

[Doctor EH?!?!]

ca was here

... sweet. Practice on drawing the people, and this will be even better! LOVE THE DALEKS!

btw... is that YOu James?

Chitch responds:

Thanks for the review! I have improved a lot over the years. This was a very early project

[XIN Session 01]

dude...

just got back from watching your exquisite! SURFACE.

Love this; Love SURFACE.

Can't wait.

[Surface EP 2 (Part 1/ 2)]

omg

ohwow. this has me hooked.
Damn I love thinkin too much.

THanks for this, guys. it rocks. MAkes me hopeful.