Vagenturecbos's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[sharp lines]

Heh. Reminds me of that commercial where the guy is talking about his battle with the kraken in the pub. So funny. Seems like this art style would do well telling a stormy ship v. sea monster story, or maybe a horror set at sea. Or in the 70's. Or in an Errol Flynn movie. hee hee!

[mine octobit 2018]

Well that was a gorgeous feast for the eyes. Bravo!

[Tribute to FSM]

You shoudl see that other guy's one... (Semicubic) there're multiple meatballs. hilarious.

[The flying spaghetti monster]

it's the Ragu Pantheon.

[Destiny Falls]

ah, the colors... ;) me and my mom have a joke about having played LOZ: Breath of the Wild... 'We've been there'. This looks like a place in that game, LOL. 'We've been there.'

[Things Just Got Sorta Serious]

uh, the TMI infodump isn't all that endearing, chief. THAT being said, you sure do care for your characters! ;) Always a good thing. Now, as for your English... that needs a bit of work. You're oversharing, and there are times 'The mana in an elves body' where you need to correct punctuation and possibly other issues. (elves should be elf's- elves is plural, elf's is singular possessive, elves' is plural possessive - oh god I never thought I remembered all that stuff) anyway, yeah. that. take care of those types of things. ;) and truncate your TMI bombing to something more informative but not dull, and it should be more ah, shall we say, to the point. Do you really NEED to say it in so many words when you can say it more effectively and dynamically in less? ;) a few thoughts ta think, yo.

[1 9 8 4]

ah, yes... I was born in 83. GOD HOW I WISH I COULD FORGET.

[Valley of the Jellyfish]

LOLSWEET. Reminds me of Outlaw Star.

Outlaw...Starfish. badumtshhh

[The Unholy Society - First chapter]

I like the player character's art the best. It's just FUN!

FatDogGames responds:

Thank you!